He’d chase the multihued butterflies
But that alone won’t suffice.
Days, deprived of all hassles,
Were spent, building muddy castles.
The river water, clear and pristine,
Reflected his face, dirty, but divine,
Carried his paper boats afar
As the aroma filled in, with the first shower.
Surfaced he mountains with supernatural zest
And poised atop as if he’d conquered
Without the slightest fear of any jeopardy,
Undaunted, he tread on life’s trajectory.
Happiness, for him, was a matter of pick
Widespread as an air-borne epidemic.
Life had never been a smooth sailing cruise
Where success came only with a scar and bruise.
Life, if looked at from a child's perspective, the way he struggles to accomplish minor tasks and discovers happiness in them, unaware of tomorrow, fearless of the present, can always be lived better.
Simple is sweet... thoda complicated laga...:(
ReplyDeleteokk boss..
ReplyDeletewill try keeping simple.. ;)
i liked it!!!
ReplyDeletei like i like
ReplyDeleteu need sum wrk with ur metaphors :)
ReplyDeletemmm... thnk u.. keep criticizing..:)
ReplyDeleten also help me out if possibl!
wel, its not criticism.... a very good poet once taught me the mistakes we tend to make while writing poems....apparently you made sum mistakes i made then....your ideas are impeccable but ur metaphors slightly off- track..
ReplyDeletei'l surely wrk on it..
ReplyDeletethnk u soo very mch!!
Hey Anjali :)
ReplyDeleteYour verse's are not as Naive as U
Instead as Alluring as U
I have a humble Request
Dont ever give up this Quest
From, your true Admirer
Now ur' Blog Follower...
Hey Bharat....
ReplyDeleteThank u soo mch!!
theres a poet hidden in evry1..
guess in u too... :)