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Friday, July 16, 2010

THE CRUISE OF LIFE

He’d chase the multihued butterflies

But that alone won’t suffice.

Days, deprived of all hassles,

Were spent, building muddy castles.


The river water, clear and pristine,

Reflected his face, dirty, but divine,

Carried his paper boats afar

As the aroma filled in, with the first shower.


Surfaced he mountains with supernatural zest

And poised atop as if he’d conquered Mt. Everest.

Without the slightest fear of any jeopardy,

Undaunted, he tread on life’s trajectory.


Happiness, for him, was a matter of pick

Widespread as an air-borne epidemic.

Life had never been a smooth sailing cruise

Where success came only with a scar and bruise.


Life, if looked at from a child's perspective, the way he struggles to accomplish minor tasks and discovers happiness in them, unaware of tomorrow, fearless of the present, can always be lived better.




10 comments:

  1. Simple is sweet... thoda complicated laga...:(

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  2. okk boss..
    will try keeping simple.. ;)

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  3. u need sum wrk with ur metaphors :)

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  4. mmm... thnk u.. keep criticizing..:)
    n also help me out if possibl!

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  5. wel, its not criticism.... a very good poet once taught me the mistakes we tend to make while writing poems....apparently you made sum mistakes i made then....your ideas are impeccable but ur metaphors slightly off- track..

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  6. i'l surely wrk on it..
    thnk u soo very mch!!

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  7. Hey Anjali :)

    Your verse's are not as Naive as U
    Instead as Alluring as U
    I have a humble Request
    Dont ever give up this Quest

    From, your true Admirer
    Now ur' Blog Follower...

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  8. Hey Bharat....
    Thank u soo mch!!
    theres a poet hidden in evry1..
    guess in u too... :)

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